


1). What planning did you do for your filming task, and how did this planning aid in the filming?
For the planning of our preliminary task we did a story board, a shot list and a shooting map. On the shot list we decided what shots would be used throughout the preliminary task. For the story board we drew what would be within the mise-en-scene, and the angle of the camera. For the shooting map we planned out where we would get our character to walk, and what way they would leave. All the planning before the preliminary task helped because the shooting of the short film went quickly and smoothly because we knew where we wanted things, and how we wanted it to look. We referred to the shooting map, and shot list a lot while filming because these two things helped us with where to put the camera, and what we had decided through filming.
2). What camera and editing techniques and codes did you use in your film and how do they influence the audiences understanding of the film? (eg. camera and shot types etc; match on action, shot reverse shot, 180 degree rule)Ellipses is used while Margaret is waiting in Thornton's office and this shot shows Margaret was waiting for about an hour. Clock to her shows the passage of time, and the close up of her face shows her expression which engages the audience into the mise-en-scene and its more personal also shows the important of her character. The shot engages us into Margaret's impatience.
Gender is constructed by the close up of Margaret where she dominantes 2/3 of the mise-en-scene. Her stance is haughty (attitude) and her gaze is firm, her chin up which suggests she is assertive. Margaret is out and about on her which also shows her independence. Margaret is very wide-eyed, with no hunched shoulders. She also doesn't rely on clothes to show the audience how wealthy she is because her costume doesn't show 'wealthy'.
When she is in the mill and walking she dominates the mise-en-scene again and her walk is very determined in what she wants. Non-ambient lighting, and an optimistic soundtrack. When Margaret coughs in the mill this shows an unhealthy enviroment. When walking into the cotton room its like 'the children entering Narnia' the shot shows that the mill world is foreign to her and her expression is full of wonder.
The shot of Thornton's masculine image is constructed by a low-angle shot which makes him seem dominant. There is something quite 'predatory' about him like he is looking for something wrong. There's something dark and dangerous about him and the stony face indicates a harsh man. Margaret looks at him because he is different and she hasn't ever seen a man like this before and she is 'taken' with him.
A shot of a weak man with 7 kids is shown because he is putting the whole mill in danger by smoking a pipe. Thornton yells, 'I SAW YA' which puts Thornton in a lower rank because of his common accent but he still has more power than the workers. Gender is constructed in the 'fight' scene by power, and Margaret just watching. Thornton is physically dominant by using violence. Mrgaret interferre's which is unlike a woman by yelling, 'STOP'. This tells us again that Margaret is assertive, brave and doesn't fit into the ordinary female role. Thornton responds, 'Who're you? What you doing here?' Margaret has never been spoken to like this before because she is of higher class. Margaret gives her full name which shows she is confident about her identity and wealth. 'Get her out of here' Thornton yells at a worker, suggests he is ashamed of what he is done or he doesn't want her to see this side of him. Also suggests his contempt for Margaret, and he doesn't talk directly to her anymore.
There is a shot of women and children looking shocked because it shows they rely on Thornton for employment and if they do something wrong they will be fired. The fact they are doing nothing to stop the violence shows that the way Thornton treats his workers is not uncommon and its a quite 'natural' way of dealing with them. The audience at home are shocked because we don't treat anybody that way now. The close up of the woman at the mill shows she admires Margaret for standing up to Thornton, also there is a comparison between the two women. The woman who works at the mill is not doing anything to stop the violence which is how women should respond, while Margaret steps in and inteferres which is uncommon.
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The film opens up as the bells of Venice in the beginning, and a man humming, then the scene fades to black.
The scene then opens to an outdoor setting, which is quite adyllic and picturesque and soft music is playing. A shot of the girl is shown of her throwing a ball into shallow water which could represent what's about to come. There are a lot of water shots and reflected image of the girl in water.
The man in the house, the girl's father, is looking at images and there is an image of a church with a red hooded girl sitting in a pew. His daughter outside is wearing a red hood, then the man begins to panic linking the two things. Then the camera shots link togther beause there is a shot of their boy on a bike then he falls off which begins the danger feeling of the movie. The sound effects stay inside the house, but the camera stays outside which links the scene together. The shot outside is the boy running after he see's his sister drowning. Inside the house water leaks onto the image the man is looking at which also links water and the little girl together again. The colours in the image begin to run, and blend together which could represent the little girl drowning outside, like the image of the redhooded figure drowning in the water the man has spilled. The man then jumps up in panic, and runs outside.
Effective tension music is playing then the man's scream breaks through the music and the little boy shouting, 'Daddy'. The man rushes into the water, desperately searching for the little girl who has gone under, and the camera stays on him and the little boy overlooking his father. When the man finds her, he comes to the surface and his desperate screams are the only sounds made. The camera shows the Dad trying to ressusitate his daughter, and his son overlooking his Dad and his attempts. The Mum remains in the house for the whole ordeal, then the camera shows her through the glass of her house when her life is perfectly normal and everyone is safe. Then she looks up and the camera captures her life being ruined and her loud scream links to the next shot of loud drilling.
I like the opening of this thriller because the sound and camera shots all smoothly link together. When the scene opens everything is beautiful and the little girl shows innocence but then there is the devasting shift in mood and camera angles, but everything is done smoothly and everything flows together nicely.